Merry Christmas, girly. I'm working on your Christmas present right now. I'll set it under the tree for you soon as I'm done writing it.
When I asked you earlier what makes a love story convincing .. the obvious answer is » the love.
The quality of the love. And other things, too. But mostly the love. What is a love-story without love? (Just another story.)
And notice how you cant really see love itself. Rather you can only see the results of it, the effects of it. The consequences of it, if you will. (The same goes for hate, unfortunately.)
Loving actions do not necessarily speak loudly .. but they do speak clearly. They do indeed.
In order to have a convincing love-story, you first need a convincing love. Then you need convincing lovers. Then you need a convincing storyteller, who is himself a convincing lover.
You need a lot a things, girly .. in order to write a convincing love-story. That's why only one was written in the last century. (According to Vanity Fair. I mean, if anybody would know...)
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